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Ali_ · Feb 6th, 2009, 09:16 am

yeh terey khat,teri khushbo teray khwab-o-khayal
mata-e-jaan hain teray qol-o-qasam ki tarah
guzishta saal inhain main nay gin k rakha tha
kisi ghareeb ki jori huwi raqam ki tarah

devdas ki parro · Feb 6th, 2009, 09:19 am

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ali_

yeh terey khat,teri khushbo teray khwab-o-khayal

mata-e-jaan hain teray qol-o-qasam ki tarah
guzishta saal inhain main nay gin k rakha tha

kisi ghareeb ki jori huwi raqam ki tarah

Awesome jee!!!!!!!!!!
bayhud khobsoraat kalaam

Ali_ · Feb 6th, 2009, 09:21 am

thanks jee

devdas ki parro · Feb 6th, 2009, 09:23 am

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ali_

thanks jee

Its ok jee
ur sharingz wz really good

*Masoom Muskaan* · Feb 6th, 2009, 09:31 am

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ali_

yeh terey khat,teri khushbo teray khwab-o-khayal

mata-e-jaan hain teray qol-o-qasam ki tarah
guzishta saal inhain main nay gin k rakha tha

kisi ghareeb ki jori huwi raqam ki tarah

tehk he ho ge

AQ · Feb 7th, 2009, 11:44 pm

kissi ghareeb kee joRi huvee raqam kee tarah ...

amazing use of metaphor...

so, why is poet talking about previous year? does it mean something signifcant for the current year?

Who is the poet? If it is part of a poem and you have it at your disposal, we will love to read it as well

Ali_ · Feb 8th, 2009, 08:51 am

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Originally Posted by AQ

kissi ghareeb kee joRi huvee raqam kee tarah ...

amazing use of metaphor...

so, why is poet talking about previous year? does it mean something signifcant for the current year?

Who is the poet? If it is part of a poem and you have it at your disposal, we will love to read it as well

yeah amazing use of metaphor

read somewhere could not found the whole nazm (if there is any) but i think its only Qata'