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Old Mar 11th, 2009, 11:14 pm   #1 (permalink)
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khwabon mein tere gar meri khwahish nahin hogi
mujhse teri aankhon ki parastish nahin hogi

aawaaz meri baith to sakti hai thakan se
lahje mein magar mere guzaarish nahin hogi

ho fikr jise khud wo mera haal parakh le
mujhse to mere gham ki numaish nahin hogi

maane ke na maane mujhe 'shehzaad' zamana
ye tai hai ke mujhse koi saazish nahin hogi
really liked the bolded lines.
PS: I dont know what prefix to put when;sigh;
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:03 am   #2 (permalink)
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khud pasandi ka ishtehaar oor itni dhair sari jinati zuban ka taRka ........

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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:10 am   #3 (permalink)
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heylllooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!
woh jinnate zuban nahi asan see urdu hai;honh;
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:15 am   #4 (permalink)
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Is this your own poetry?

if it is then, you can use "personal" prefix
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:21 am   #5 (permalink)
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ohh.I dont write peotry so its not mines .I just read it somewhere so I should prefix as muntakhib.;hmm;
ab jo prefix'es already ker chuki hoon unka kya karoon??
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:24 am   #6 (permalink)
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I will change them...

We have these prefix on a temporary basis...

Insha Allah, once we will have enough participants, we will be further dividing this section in future... It could take a long time to do that as well... that depends...

We might have more than one sub-sections of Poetry... more than personal and selected....
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 12:29 am   #7 (permalink)
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ok.then change all of them.sub kaheen aur se parhey huey hain ;hehe;
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We have these prefix on a temporary basis...
my interest in poetry is also temporary ;hehe;
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Old Mar 12th, 2009, 05:37 am   #8 (permalink)
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heylllooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!
woh jinnate zuban nahi asan see urdu hai;honh;
Urdu ke ilawa jo lekha hay woh jinati hay
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