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Old Feb 25th, 2009, 12:24 pm   #1 (permalink)
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Mujhey koe achi si 2-6 lines k shayr ki zaroorat hai.
something i can use as a closing /beginning of a graduation farewell speech.
something which does not too tough urdu words.
jazak allah khair in advance
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Old Feb 25th, 2009, 01:39 pm   #2 (permalink)
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english wale ya urdu

english ke lene he to wait kero koe angrez ae gah to de gah

urdu wale lene he teb beh wait kero AQ ka ya gul ka dono ek no ke pagal heyn ebeh ate hon geh
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Old Feb 26th, 2009, 07:05 am   #3 (permalink)
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dono chalainge. But i prefer it to be in urdu .
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Old Feb 26th, 2009, 07:14 am   #4 (permalink)
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english wale ya urdu

english ke lene he to wait kero koe angrez ae gah to de gah

urdu wale lene he teb beh wait kero AQ ka ya gul ka dono ek no ke pagal heyn ebeh ate hon geh
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dono chalainge. But i prefer it to be in urdu .

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Old Feb 26th, 2009, 07:24 am   #5 (permalink)
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koe please kuch batai na.
i have to include it in my speech . so i need it by friday.;sigh;
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Old Feb 26th, 2009, 10:52 am   #7 (permalink)
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dono chalainge. But i prefer it to be in urdu .
dono kea kaha cheleyn geh
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Old Feb 27th, 2009, 07:01 am   #8 (permalink)
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I will try to find something....

I think Azad bhai can give something than doing 2+2 with the two different posts
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Old Feb 27th, 2009, 07:30 am   #9 (permalink)
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For a simple and most common sher, Iqbal' famous poem can help...


Zindagi ho meri, parwaaaanaY keeee soorat Yaa Ra'b
ILm kee shamma' saY ho mujh ko mohabbat Yaa Ra'b

I will look for other options too....

Azad, Ali_ and GUL... bachi kee help karo naa

Abb tau redidentity bhai bhee aa rahai haiN... insha Allah, unn kay pass bhee kuch naa kuch achaa hogaa... bulkaY hum say tau achaa hee hogaa
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Old Feb 27th, 2009, 08:33 am   #10 (permalink)
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^ aap ghussa bhi hotey hain aur saath mai hanstey bhi hain !! aisa kyon;hmm;
nahi we used to sing lab pe aati hai every monday in school.
aur kuch dain na. kul subah tak mujhey speech tayyar ker leyni hai.
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^ aap ghussa bhi hotey hain aur saath mai hanstey bhi hain !! aisa kyon;hmm;
nahi we used to sing lab pe aati hai every monday in school.
aur kuch dain na. kul subah tak mujhey speech tayyar ker leyni hai.
pagal heyn bataea to tah
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Old Feb 27th, 2009, 10:42 am   #12 (permalink)
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:blush hoing; i soo agree with AQ ;winkey;
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oye ! abhi help chahiye so abhi sub aqalmand hain ;winkey; you bhi ;hehe;
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Ustaad k hotey humaari kyaa majaal :-d
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english wale ya urdu

english ke lene he to wait kero koe angrez ae gah to de gah

urdu wale lene he teb beh wait kero AQ ka ya gul ka dono ek no ke pagal heyn ebeh ate hon geh
tumheiN koi baat nahi bataani chaahiye
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tumheiN koi baat nahi bataani chaahiye
muge seb pata he
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koe please kuch batai na.
i have to include it in my speech . so i need it by friday.;sigh;

in meiN sey koi achaa lagey tou use kar lo


na merey qalam sey likhi gai, na meri zubaan sey ada huwi
jo nazar sey kehney ki baat hey , kisi harf meiN na samaaey gi

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Umr bhar likhtey rahey phir bhi warq sada raha
jaanay kya lafz thay jo hum sey tehreer na huwey

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Hame Jab Alwida Kehene lago tou
Muskura Dena

Sitara Saath Kar Dena

K Raaste Me Andhere Bhi Too Aiinge
Kisi Hurf-e-Dua Ka Istaara Saath Kar Dena
Hamey!!! Zaaad-e-Safar Ko
Tumhari Yaad KI Soghaaat Kaafffi He
Tumare Saath Guzara HUa Pal Bhi Ghaneeemat He
Kahin Thehre Jo Raaaste Me
Sunheri Yaad Ki Suurat
Tumhen Hamraah Paainge
To Hum Tanhaa Kaha Honge
Magar Phr Bhi

Hame Jab Alwida Kehene Lago To
Muskura Dena

Sitara Saath Kar Dena

Kisi Hurf-e-Dua Ka Istaara Saath Kar Dena
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Old Feb 28th, 2009, 12:34 am   #17 (permalink)
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thanks . Magar none is the type i want.
its me (final year/senior student) who will be giving a few minutes ki speech.
The audience will be my teachers/lecturers & the juniors.
i just want a few lines which express my gratitude to the teachers & the juniors , the sorrow for leaving this place & the fact that everything in life has an end.

PS: not too tough urdu please.most ko samajh nahi ayegi.(like the one you wrote gul)
PS2: thanks for the PM
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Old Feb 28th, 2009, 06:33 am   #18 (permalink)
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thanks . Magar none is the type i want.
its me (final year/senior student) who will be giving a few minutes ki speech.
The audience will be my teachers/lecturers & the juniors.
i just want a few lines which express my gratitude to the teachers & the juniors , the sorrow for leaving this place & the fact that everything in life has an end.

PS: not too tough urdu please.most ko samajh nahi ayegi.(like the one you wrote gul)
PS2: thanks for the PM
Gul's poem is actually very easy with simple words... but for the bold part, I did not really have anything simple that I could recall... I googled and found a very relevant english poem by poet Robert Bly... Perhaps this will do...?


When we stride or stroll across the frozen lake,
We place our feet where they have never been.
We walk upon the unwalked. But we are uneasy.
Who is down there but our old teachers?

Water that once could take no human weight-
We were students then- holds up our feet,
And goes on ahead of us for a mile.
Beneath us the teachers, and around us the stillness
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thanks .PS: not too tough urdu please.most ko samajh nahi ayegi.(like the one you wrote gul)
PS2: thanks for the PM
PM meiN itna kuch bheja tha kyaa kuch bhi kaam ka nahi hey

drop yeh sab sey aasaaN Urdu thi , Iss sey zeyaada simple Urdu Masoom ki hey ab:-d

Well AQ ney jo post ki hey wuhi achi hey ab ya yeh waali iss k ilaawa

For teaching children lessons,
To help them as they grow,
Let this gift remind you,
You're the best teacher we know!
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I chose this special present because I wanted you to know,
That I'm grateful for your hard work in helping me to grow.
For your constant understanding and for always being there,
To tell me I can do it and to show me that you care!
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  • You are the bestest Teacher in this world. Wherever I may go in my life, I will always remember that I had an excellent guide in the form of a teacher, You.
  • I found guidance, friendship, discipline and love, everything, in one person. And that person is you (name of your teacher)
  • Without you, we would have been lost. Thank you teacher for guiding us, inspiring us and making us what we are today.
  • We will always be thankful to you for all the hard work and efforts you have put in, for educating us.
  • You are not only our teacher. Rather, you are friend, philosopher and guide, all molded into one person. We will always be grateful to you for your support.
  • I may not say it always. But, I mean it whenever I say it. Thank You Teacher for all the things you have done for us.
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 11:35 pm   #20 (permalink)
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Jazaakallah khair everyone for trying to help me.
farewell hoo gaya & what i said didnt even matter much.Its over & i'm leaving the place in a few months for good & i dont like the feeling.Words could Never have said what i felt at that moment.
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