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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 09:15 am   #1 (permalink)
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Ajnabi Shahr k ajnabi raastey
meri tanhaai par muskaratey rahey
meiN buhat deir tak yuNhi chalta raha
tum buhat deir tak yaad aatey rahey
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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 03:24 pm   #2 (permalink)
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aaj tanhai kisi hamdam-e-daireen ki tarah
karne aai hai meri saaqi giri shaam dhalay

Munatzir baithay hain hum donon ke mehtaab ubhray
aur tera aks jhalaknay lagay har saaye talay

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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 03:43 pm   #3 (permalink)
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Tanhaaaai-e-Shab maiN HazeeeeN kiyaa?
Anjum naheeN teraY hum nasheeN kiyaa?
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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 04:06 pm   #4 (permalink)
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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 07:19 pm   #5 (permalink)
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Jab raaaat kii tanhaaii dil ban k dhaRakti hey
yaadoN k dareechoN meiN chilman si siraktii hey
lobaan meiN chingaari jaisey koi rakh jaaey
yuuN yaad terii shab bhar seeney meiN sulagti hey

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Tanha rehna seekh rahii huuN
mar k jeena seekh rahii huuN
Sabr ko zaad-e-raah bana kar
Kaanch pe chalna seekh rahii huuN
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Old Feb 23rd, 2009, 09:50 pm   #6 (permalink)
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very nice ones
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aaj tanhai kisi hamdam-e-daireen ki tarah
karne aai hai meri saaqi giri shaam dhalay

Munatzir baithay hain hum donon ke mehtaab ubhray
aur tera aks jhalaknay lagay har saaye talay
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Tanhaaaai-e-Shab maiN HazeeeeN kiyaa?
Anjum naheeN teraY hum nasheeN kiyaa?
Explain please
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Old Feb 24th, 2009, 06:04 pm   #7 (permalink)
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Thaki thaki sii Tanhaai hey, ghuTi ghuTi be-zaari hey
ye kaesey gardaab meiN hum ney kishti khawab utaari hey
Ruuh k andar jitney diye heiN, sub hi jala lo aaj ki raat
jaagney walo aaj ki shab ka lamha lamha bhaari hey
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Old Feb 25th, 2009, 09:42 am   #8 (permalink)
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Jee rahai haiN hum Tanhaa
Aur teraa ghum Tanhaaaaa
KaisaY hum uThaayeN geY
tera har sitam Tanhaaaaa?




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Explain please
Why are you so sad in the lonliness of night?
when stars are your companion and are bright


LOL... I converted Iqbal's couplet into english poetry as well when translating... actual meanings are ... Why are you sad in the lonliness of night... are not the stars your companions?
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Old Feb 25th, 2009, 11:44 am   #9 (permalink)
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Old Feb 28th, 2009, 09:38 pm   #10 (permalink)
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har taraf har jagah be-shumaar aadmi
phir bhi tanhaaiyoN ka shikaar aadmi
subah sey shaam tak bojh dhota huwa
apnii hii laash ka khud mazaar aadmi
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YuuN tou sab k saath yakjaa huN meiN
magar phir bhi kitna tanhaa hoon meiN
pewasta kal tak mein bhi tha shajjar sey
aaj magar patt-jhaR kaa patta huN meiN
tanhaai k kiss karb meiN ji rah huN mein Zafar
jaesey apne shaanon pe apna hi janaza huN meiN

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Jalney lagii ruuh meiN judaai tou ro diye
tanhaaiyoN ney khaak uRaai tou ro diye
Khushboo ney koi yad dilaaya taRap utthey
PhooloN ney daastaaN sunaai tou ro diye
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 06:29 am   #11 (permalink)
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Baithkar tere gam ki tanhai me tere jalve socha karte hai,
tera milna ab mushkil hai, teri yaad me jiya karte hai…
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 06:39 am   #12 (permalink)
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Not exactly a "tanhaai" sher but the connotations in the sher refers to "tanhaai"

BaiTh kar Saaayaaa-e-Gul maiN Nasir
Hum bahut roye, jub woh yaad aaya
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 06:44 am   #13 (permalink)
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baiTh eska kea metleb hoing ?
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 06:55 am   #14 (permalink)
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 08:04 am   #15 (permalink)
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 08:09 am   #16 (permalink)
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 08:10 am   #17 (permalink)
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muge urdu nehe asekte kebeh
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 08:13 am   #18 (permalink)
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Saayaa-e-Gul = Shadow of a Flower
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Old Mar 1st, 2009, 08:14 am   #19 (permalink)
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gobi ka phool beh hota he kea wo
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yahaaN kya kar rahi ho sirf Sheir Post karo
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Raat huwii hey gehrii bahut tanhaaii ko taaraa dey do
Saagar meiN kahiN duub na jaye, in moujoN ko kinara dey do
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Jidhar bhi dekhtaa hoon tanhaai nazar aati hai
aapke intzaar mein har shaam guzar jaati hai
asar karti yakeenan gar chooh jaati unke dil ko lekin
afsos ke aah meri fizaaon hi mein bikhar jaati hai
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Tum ne tou thak k dasht meiN Khaemey lagaa liye
Tanhaa kaTey kisi kaa safar tumko iss sey kyaa
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Utrey jo Zindagii teriii gehraaiyoN meiN hum
Mehfil meiN reh kar bhi rahey TanhaaiyoN meiN hum
deewaangi nahi tou aur kyaa kaheiN issey
Insaan dhoohndtey rahey ParchhaaiyoN mein hum
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Aaj tanhaai kisi humdum-e-dereiN ki tarha
karney aai hey meri saqi-gari shaam dhaley
muntazir beittheiN heiN hum donoN ke mehtaab ubhrey
aur tera aqs jhalkney lagey har saaey taley
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Koi Ye kaesey bataey K wuh Tanha KyuN hey
wuh Jo apna tha wuhi aur Kisi ka kyuN hey
Yehi duniya hey tou phir aesi ye duniya kyuN hey
Yehi hota hey tou aakhir yehi hota KyuN hey
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Ye wuhi tanhaai hey jis sey behal jaata tha dil
ye wuhi tanhaai hey ab jis sey ghabraata huuN meiN
Ishq meiN maan'ey hey Ghaalib ki taraf-daari mujhey
Ru'b jab chaltaa nahiN tou paaouN paR jaata huuN meiN
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Old May 22nd, 2009, 11:26 pm   #29 (permalink)
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inhi khaaLaooN mein reh jaooN ga kahin Koh kaR
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kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal ata hai
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Na koi jada na Manzil na Roshni ka suRaG
Bhatak rahi hai AnDerhoon mein zindagi mere
inhi khaaLaooN mein reh jaooN ga kahin Koh kaR
mein jantah hoon mere Hamnafaas magar lakin
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