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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 06:18 am   #1 (permalink)
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Dasht-e-wafaa maiN piyaas ka aalam ajeeb thaa
dekhaaaa tau aik dard ka dariyaaa qareeeb thaa

guzray jidhar jidhar say tamanna kay qaaflay
har har aik qadam maiN nishaa'n saleeb thaa

kuch aisee mehrbaaN tau na thee hum pay zindagi
kiyooN har koi jahaaN maiN, hamaara raqeeb thaa

kiya kiya lahu say apnay ki'ya hum nay surkhru
iss daur kay nagar ko jo dil say qareeb thaa

apna pataa tau uss nay diyaa thaa mujhay Karam
maiN khud hee kho gaya tau yeh mera naseeb thaa
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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 09:31 am   #2 (permalink)
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kuch aisee mehrbaaN tau na thee hum pay zindagi
kiyooN har koi jahaaN maiN, hamaara raqeeb thaa

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apna pataa tau uss nay diyaa thaa mujhay Karam
maiN khud hee kho gaya tau yeh mera naseeb thaa

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Dasht-e-wafaa
piyaas

dard ka dariyaaa
qareeeb

tamanna
qaaflay
nishaa'n
saleeb
mehrbaaN
jahaaN
raqeeb

lahu
ki'ya
surkhru
daur
nagar
qareeb

Karam

naseeb

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Dasht-e-wafaa maiN piyaas ka aalam ajeeb thaa

dekhaaaa tau aik dard ka dariyaaa qareeeb thaa

guzray jidhar jidhar say tamanna kay qaaflay
har har aik qadam maiN nishaa'n saleeb thaa

kuch aisee mehrbaaN tau na thee hum pay zindagi
kiyooN har koi jahaaN maiN, hamaara raqeeb thaa

kiya kiya lahu say apnay ki'ya hum nay surkhru
iss daur kay nagar ko jo dil say qareeb thaa

apna pataa tau uss nay diyaa thaa mujhay Karam

maiN khud hee kho gaya tau yeh mera naseeb thaa
'' har har aik qadam maiN nishaa'n saleeb thaa,''

yahaaN Saleeb sey kya muraad hey?
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