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Old Feb 17th, 2009, 09:01 pm   #1 (permalink)
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zindagi k kaghaz par
titliyoN k saaray rang
mil k aik doojay sey
rang khubsoorat sa
ik naya banaatey haiN
aur maiN k rangoN sey
nazm kehna chahti hooN
kuch bhi keh na pati hooN
dukh k kitnay darya jo
zindagi k kaghaz par
titliyoN k rangoN ko
is tarah miTatay haiN
khamshi sulagti hey
dard gungunatay heiN
aansuoN ki barish meiN
khaab bheeg jaatey heiN
aur....
lafz meri sansooN mein phir ulajhty jatey hein
nazm merey seeney mein phir bhaTakti jaati hey
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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 03:06 am   #2 (permalink)
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Aansuon ki barish mein .....
khaab bheeg jaatey hein ..
aur......
chat'ree layna bhool jate hein.
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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 05:56 am   #3 (permalink)
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titliyoN kaY saaraY RuNG....

hmmm... remind me of another poem...

beautiful post... who is the poet ?
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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 11:36 am   #4 (permalink)
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zindagi
kaghaz
titliyoN
rang
doojay
naya
rangoN
pati
dukh
darya
miTatay
khamshi
sulagti
dard
gungunatay
aansuoN
barish
khaab
bheeg
lafz
sansooN
ulajhty
seeney
bhaTakti

moshkel words
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Old Feb 18th, 2009, 01:53 pm   #5 (permalink)
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nice sharing as always
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Old Feb 19th, 2009, 11:43 am   #6 (permalink)
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Aansuon ki barish mein .....
khaab bheeg jaatey hein ..
aur......
chat'ree layna bhool jate hein.
Aesi surat-e-haal meiN Chahtri kaam nahi aati:-)

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titliyoN kaY saaraY RuNG....

hmmm... remind me of another poem...

beautiful post... who is the poet ?
Kon sii Poem ? Hawaala number arsaal kijiye
Poet ka naam nahi maloom

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zindagi
kaghaz
titliyoN
rang
doojay
naya
rangoN
pati
dukh
darya
miTatay
khamshi
sulagti
dard
gungunatay
aansuoN
barish
khaab
bheeg
lafz
sansooN
ulajhty
seeney
bhaTakti

moshkel words
Ghaltii ho gai muaa'f kar do Chalo AQ sey poocho shabash :-d
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nice sharing as always
Thanks , How you doing :-)
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