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Old May 15th, 2009, 07:32 pm   #1 (permalink)
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Assalam-o-alaikum all

Aaj hum PakFuse k Poery sec meiN aik new Game ka Ine'qaad kar rahey heiN, Aap sab Dil-o-jaan sey iss meiN hissa lijiye , ye aapka mera, aur hum sab ka Forum hey iss ko kaamyaab hum sab ney mil kar karna hey :-)

YuN hey k MeiN aik Misra likhti huN aur jo bhi issey complete karey ga/gi, wuh Game ko aagey baRhaaey

Ab iss k Waada'e- Farda ko bhi tarastey heiN
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Old May 16th, 2009, 02:41 am   #2 (permalink)
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Old May 16th, 2009, 09:27 pm   #3 (permalink)
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oh haan na aap ko to 12 baje ka intezar karna paRta hay
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Ab iss k Waada'e- Farda ko bhi tarastey heiN
Bhai agar waqay'atan kisi ka shair hai tu humhay nahi malooM , haan tukbandi zaroor karaydaytay hain is misray pe

tu arz kia hai

ab Uske wadaa-e-farda ko bhi tarastey hain
hum wo , jo khabii Uski zubaan hote thay

iss k kia chez hotee hai?
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Bhai agar waqay'atan kisi ka shair hai tu humhay nahi malooM , haan tukbandi zaroor karaydaytay hain is misray pe

tu arz kia hai

ab Uske wadaa-e-farda ko bhi tarastey hain
hum wo , jo khabii Uski zubaan hote thay

iss k kia chez hotee hai?

Ab usskey waaa'e-farda ko bhi tarastey heiN
kal usski baat pe kyuN Aetaabr aa na geyaa

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ab game ko aagay kon barhai ga?
Gul thora sa samjhao iss game kay baaray main.. mujhay samajh nahi aai
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chalein....iss ka aakhri misra bataieyen..? (aakhri line..)

TOHMAT-E-CHANDD APNE ZIMMAY DHARR CHALLAY,
JISS LEEAY AAYE THHAY SOU HUM KARR CHALLAY,
ZINDAGI HAI YA KOI TOOFAAN HAI.....
HUM TOW ISS JEENAY K HAATOUN MARR CHALLAY,
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ab game ko aagay kon barhai ga?
Gul thora sa samjhao iss game kay baaray main.. mujhay samajh nahi aai
Khaamoshi aap bhi MM ki sis heiN

Pehley i thought Personal kartey heiN koi bhi aik misra likhey aur doosra Fuser ussko Complete karey lekin yahaan abhi Poet kam heiN jo heiN wuh bhi nikammey heiN issliye Mutkhib sheir use kiye jaaeiN

Sheir ka pehle ya last misra likha jaaey aur ussko complete kiya jaaey sheir sirf mashhoor Sho'ara k hoN tou acha hey, sab participate karein tou maza hey werna mujhey akeley hi khelna hey tou
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Old May 18th, 2009, 12:35 am   #20 (permalink)
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chalein....iss ka aakhri misra bataieyen..? (aakhri line..)


TOHMAT-E-CHANDD APNE ZIMMAY DHARR CHALLAY,
JISS LEEAY AAYE THHAY SOU HUM KARR CHALLAY,
ZINDAGI HAI YA KOI TOOFAAN HAI.....
HUM TOW ISS JEENAY K HAATOUN MARR CHALLAY,

?????????????????????????????????????????????????
ahaa Meer Dard

Hum jahaaN maiN aaye thaY Tanhaa, Valay
Saaaaath apnay abb usssay laY kar challlay

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Pehley i thought Personal kartey heiN koi bhi aik misra likhey aur doosra Fuser ussko Complete karey
That is called "Tara'hi Mushaa'ira"

we can do that... we have, Aliyish, you, redidentity, azad, and this naacheez who sometime write their own poetry....


Now complete this one:

"Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa"
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"Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa"
Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa
jub haath sey un kay tokri chooti, saraa kooRa kurkut bikhar gayaa

adab arz hai


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Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa
jo chaman khizaan main ujar gaya main usi ki fasl-e-bahar hon
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Aanso hansi hansi may nikal aaye kion faraz?
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ahaa Meer Dard

Hum jahaaN maiN aaye thaY Tanhaa, Valay
Saaaaath apnay abb usssay laY kar challlay

That is called "Tara'hi Mushaa'ira"

we can do that... we have, Aliyish, you, redidentity, azad, and this naacheez who sometime write their own poetry....


Now complete this one:

"Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa"
asall mein kuch yun hai:

TOHMAT-E-CHANDD APNE ZIMMAY DHARR CHALLAY,
JISS LEEAY AAYE THHAY SOU HUM KARR CHALLAY,
ZINDAGI HAI YA KOI TOOFAAN HAI.....
HUM TOW ISS JEENAY K HAATOUN MARR CHALLAY,
-------> DARD KUCHH MALOOM YE LOGE SUBB KIS LEEAY AAYE...
KEEDHARR CHALLAY.
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Mera rung-O-roop bigaR gayaa, mera yaar mujh say bichaR gayaa
jo chaman khizaan main ujar gaya main usi ki fasl-e-bahar hon
mine was more practical

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Aanso hansi hansi may nikal aaye kion faraz?
Aanso hansi hansi may nikal aaye kion faraz
baithay baithay yea konsa ghum yaad aa gaya




In BaarishooN sey dosti achi nahi faraz?
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Old May 18th, 2009, 06:54 am   #26 (permalink)
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Aanso hansi hansi may nikal aaye kion faraz?
BeThaY BeThaY Yeh Kaun saY Gha'm Yaad Aa gaye..

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asall mein kuch yun hai:

TOHMAT-E-CHANDD APNE ZIMMAY DHARR CHALLAY,
JISS LEEAY AAYE THHAY SOU HUM KARR CHALLAY,
ZINDAGI HAI YA KOI TOOFAAN HAI.....
HUM TOW ISS JEENAY K HAATOUN MARR CHALLAY,
-------> DARD KUCHH MALOOM YE LOGE SUBB KIS LEEAY AAYE...
KEEDHARR CHALLAY.
hmmm... yeh tau Maqta hai, hum samjhay next sher poochaa thaa


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let's complete this one:

Dha'L chuki raat, bikharnaY lagaa taaroN kaa ghubaar
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oh ho... that was completed earlier ASA ...
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mine was more practical



Aanso hansi hansi may nikal aaye kion faraz
baithay baithay yea konsa ghum yaad aa gaya




In BaarishooN sey dosti achi nahi faraz?
Kachaa teraa makaan hai, kuch tau khayaaL kar
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Dha'L chuki raat, bikharnaY lagaa taaroN kaa ghubaar
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