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1 Munh 32 Daant - Part 1

Posted Mar 1st, 2009 at 05:52 am by Amabel
is dunya mein hum akailay
yeh baingan aur karailay

dil ka haal itna patla hai
wo humsaaya kitna achaa hai

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  1. Old Comment
    Amabel's Avatar
    paanch sitaaray.

    magar chaand kahaan hai
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    Posted Mar 1st, 2009 at 06:02 am by Amabel Amabel is offline
  2. Old Comment
    AQ's Avatar
    yeh tumhaari zaati poetry hai?

    bahut aa'laa



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    Posted Mar 1st, 2009 at 07:43 am by AQ AQ is offline
  3. Old Comment
    *Masoom Muskaan*'s Avatar
    ap ka dil he ya daal ka salan
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    Posted Mar 1st, 2009 at 09:19 am by *Masoom Muskaan* *Masoom Muskaan* is offline
  4. Old Comment
    Amabel's Avatar
    AQ, Adab ka adab karna seekho


    MM, mairay dil ka mazaq na banao. pehlay hi bara udaas udaaas phirta hai, surdiyoon ki shaamon mein
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    Posted Mar 1st, 2009 at 08:53 pm by Amabel Amabel is offline
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    GuL-e-Tasbeeh's Avatar
    is dunya mein hum akailay heiN
    yeh baingan aur karailay heiN

    dil ka haal itna patla hai
    Chaand badli ki oT sey nikla hey


    ya

    Door paRa Kheerey ka katlaa hey
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    Posted Mar 2nd, 2009 at 01:54 pm by GuL-e-Tasbeeh GuL-e-Tasbeeh is offline
  6. Old Comment
    *Masoom Muskaan*'s Avatar
    dil baher nekel jata


    gul
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    Posted Mar 2nd, 2009 at 08:06 pm by *Masoom Muskaan* *Masoom Muskaan* is offline
  7. Old Comment
    Amabel's Avatar
    sounds much better now
    is dunya mein hum akailay heiN
    yeh baingan aur karailay heiN

    This is good too
    dil ka haal itna patla hai
    Chaand badli ki oT sey nikla hey
    But I like my version (even though yours makes more sense)
    "wo hamsaya kitna achaa hai" Hawyeee La
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    Posted Mar 2nd, 2009 at 08:22 pm by Amabel Amabel is offline
  8. Old Comment
    Amabel's Avatar
    oye mairay 3 sitaray kis ney kiye hain. batameez logs
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    Posted Mar 2nd, 2009 at 08:34 pm by Amabel Amabel is offline
  9. Old Comment
    Lafanter's Avatar
    Quote:
    is dunya mein hum akailay
    yeh baingan aur karailay

    dil ka haal itna patla hai
    wo humsaaya kitna achaa hai
    tum ko kitny dafa manna kiya hai k her nazm main mera zikar mat kiya kero


    "testing performed by amabel"
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    Posted Mar 3rd, 2009 at 12:22 pm by Lafanter Lafanter is offline
    Updated Mar 4th, 2009 at 11:57 pm by Amabel
  10. Old Comment
    Amabel's Avatar
    ^ mai dheet hoon
    mujhey ju kehna hota hai, mai keh daiti hoon
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    Posted Mar 4th, 2009 at 02:11 am by Amabel Amabel is offline
  11. Old Comment
    Quote:
    wo humsaaya kitna achaa hai
    PaRa'ee MardooN pe Nazar maaT dalooo
    Buri adaaT hai yea ishay Badal dalooo
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    Posted May 2nd, 2009 at 04:38 pm by Aliyish Aliyish is offline
 

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